" I gave her a quizzical look. That is the only way I can grow as a writer, and since I am very new to all of this, any feedback will be greatly appreciated Retro. Soon we all broke away and everyone was swimming around the cove.
. She was perched on the edge, slender legs apart. ” whispered Mia, voice choked by a little sob
" I gave her a quizzical look. That is the only way I can grow as a writer, and since I am very new to all of this, any feedback will be greatly appreciated Retro. Soon we all broke away and everyone was swimming around the cove.
" I gave her a quizzical look. That is the only way I can grow as a writer, and since I am very new to all of this, any feedback will be greatly appreciated Retro. Soon we all broke away and everyone was swimming around the cove.